Take me on vacation
I’ll toss a proclamation
I’ll show you how to flutter,
to mutter, to stutter,
I’ll astonish, admonish, and stew.
I know how to be bold
slicing through the ice cold
I’ll be here when your colors run dry.
I’ll tackle and spackle
fractile and cackle
Together we’ll casade into blue
I won’t let you down,
Even way across town
I’ll tilt and I’ll twist and I’ll rant
We’ll regret, we’ll beset, we’ll procure on a bet
Cast the wind, fall on sin, refuse to give in
and guess what, I’ll stand up with you.
I’m a friend, don’t you know
I make sentences blow
I reduce strength to whimper,
can embellish a temper,
rend hearts to a crimper
make sunsets look limper,
all this with the glide of guess who
Forget all those words
that describe the absurd
Not needed or deeded or grand.
For half of the price I’ll show you not nice
pontificate trice, slam and damn the whole alice
Squeeze the story inside a brown shoe.
Do you see me unbutton
the bone from the mutton?
Banish those fancies, abscond all those prancies,
hose adverbs as dandies
Obliterate adjectives, admonish the tranies:
Allow me to conjugate too.
But this once I except;
take my bow and my step.
I’ll allow one embellished like word
I deserve all this credit
With me there’s no debit
Because I’m absofuckinglutely a VERB!
forgive me: ahahahahahahaheeheehaha
ReplyDeleteOh, goodness me. I feel totally lost somewhere between Times Square and the Mission District. Verb, can you help me? And maybe we'll find emily rabbit in the process, too.
ReplyDeleteOverwhelmed Bear trundles out.
Mr bear, verb says squish into fun. YOUR don't think you're lost.
DeleteYou get an A plus for the word 'trundle'!!!!
? On Emily, where oh where?
Xo
Oh dear , garbled words. I meant to say I don't think you're lost :-)
DeleteI have no clue...... :)
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Oh dear. So much for my personification of mr or ms Verb :-)
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Did a man write this poem?
ReplyDeleteJulie! I wrote it! Haha, why, does it sound masculine? Maybe Verb is a guy :-)
DeletePs I owe you a thousand visits xoxo
You had me guessing until the very end! This was just great fun and I bet it was fun to write, too. :)
ReplyDeleteKiss kiss Lydia, thank you! I was written in less than an hour, and yes it was fun. But I don't think I made the message about the weakness of adv and adj in favor of strong verbs :-)
DeleteI love this, kj! I think my favorite line is: "Do you see me unbutton
ReplyDeletethe bone from the mutton?" I'm also very fond of "Squeeze the story inside a brown shoe." Hee hee!
xox Pam
Pam, thank you, thank you. I like those zany lines too. I should write more like that; probably more sense than I make otherwise !
DeleteHope your writing is going a okay, prudie1
Xoxo
you a just so clever. love all the word play, MS Verb!
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you ms modifier :-)
DeleteThis one cries out to be set to music.
ReplyDeleteDim dum dum dum dum
DeleteOh what a good idea! :-)
KJ...I love it when you create your own, special WORDPLAY! You have a tremendous gift for it! Special kudos for using the Grammatical Names!!! I feel your inner-child spirit is returning!
ReplyDelete(This makes Emilwee happy!) And....me too!
Love,
♥ Robin ♥
Thanks robin. This is my ode to verbs ! :-)
DeleteXoxo
heheheheheeeee! You're just plain silly with a capital S! That's one of the things I love about you ;)♥
ReplyDeleteLo, hee hee, you are as silly as I am. Great minds, you know.... :-)
DeleteXoxo
You're forgiven.
ReplyDelete;-D
giggle
babs, well that's a relief :^)
Deletedo you know i lived in norman for two years? you probably did know, right?
xoxo
hahahaha...supsense poem :P unbutton the mutton..hahahaha
ReplyDeletewhat a great comment! you made me laugh be cause you got it!!!!
ReplyDeletetime to come visit you, been a while ♥
lovely blog u have KJ
ReplyDeletemost awesome thing about your writing is the way u play with words because only few people can do that :)
looking forward to new posts !!
fantastic ending
Because I’m absofuckinglutely a VERB :D
thank you and welcome, jyoti. i'm glad you liked that last line, it was the first line i thought of!
Deletei look forward to your scribbles ♥
"Because I’m absofuckinglutely a VERB"
ReplyDeleteDont we all wish this was us....and that is a brilliant line by the way;-)
Wander
Thanks chris xoxo
ReplyDeleteDarlin this is, of course, wonderful.... The metaphors are particularly fetching! Come on over...a little post for Miss R...
ReplyDeleteI'll be a coming' chrisy!!!
DeleteSuch a cute, fun poem! Wonderful word play :) I do like the playful tone and point of view, for sure. I particularly like the "obliterate adjectives, admonish the tranies/allow me to conjugate too" line. Such great usage of these words!
ReplyDeleteThanks a million ms Phoenix xo
DeleteAnd your one brave thing: thanks for that too.
Ps I am super super happy for you
:-)