Saturday, January 23, 2010

More of a Novel in a Paragraph


I am writing. Regularly. Passionately. What great news for me.
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Please remember that what I am writing is not strictly or always about me. (For example,Casey is a narrator, not necessarily kj.) Otherwise I am going to feel vulnerable and awkward every time I share. I am going to try to post two or three snippets each week. So far your comments have been wild winds for my sails, and I thank you each so so much. You have no idea how much your support helps. I only hope I give it back as richly as I receive it.
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Every Day
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The first time the topic of sex came up Casey and Maggie were sitting under a wide blue sky at a small outdoor table, sipping wine and Sambuca in Newport, Rhode Island, not yet aware that in three months they would fall in love with one another after spending a wild wonderful night together, surprisingly. On that day in Newport Casey asked Maggie how often she made love.“Everyday,” Maggie replied, “When there is someone to make love with.”
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At the time Casey had successfully, finally, bounced away from the sting of a two year impossible relationship, her first ever with a woman and characterized by heated sex everyday and sometimes several times a day, the first time, despite a marriage of twelve years, that Casey understood the physics that allowed two people to merge into one, orgasmically speaking. Casey loved sex after that, sought it out, not recklessly, screening for at least some emotional justification.
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So when Maggie said, “Everyday,” Casey understood. And how they began everyday and in time that became every month and then seldom in the years and decades that passed between them was anybody’s guess. But on that day in Newport, Casey just smiled at Maggie and said, “Me too. Everyday for me too.”
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Lina & the Green Shaggy Coat
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The therapist has not planned well so by the time she gets to the house, now two days before Christmas, she has only one plastic purple hair band and one bag of gold coins left and she holds them out, asking the two girls who wants what. Lina stares at her, stares down at the hair band. “You did this for us?” she asks, looking to her mother and sister, wanting them to agree.
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When the therapy work is done and the therapist is ready to leave, Lina approaches her, reaches for her shaggy winter coat, places both hands on the bottom button, then moves up to the next, one by one, until the coat is tight and snug around the therapist's neck. . Lina takes a small step back, pats the top button, smiles. “There,” Lina tells her. “Now when you go outside you won’t be cold.”
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Later when the therapist thinks about it, she is glad that she let Lina her touch her, glad that she did not tell her to keep her hands to herself. And from nowhere she understands that in return for the plastic purple hair band, Lina has given her a Christmas gift.
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In that moment six year old Lina becomes a loving Mother, making sure the therapist is ready for the cold.

16 comments:

  1. Oh the story of Lina and the coat. I love that one kj.

    xoxox

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  2. I love that one too KJ - allowing and accepting a gift. Lovely.

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  3. renee, thank you moon sister.xoxo

    mim, thank you too. xoxo

    general comment: oh jeez. what about the sex one, hee hee?

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  4. Wow I loved both of them... making me want to learn more ~

    I thought the "sex" one felt like a coming of age in her Cassey's own skin.

    I have another dinner aiting for you on my blog: )
    Love~~~~P

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  5. Nice one!More important to know how to receive than to give?

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  6. I think anyone that has been (or is in) a relationship that spans decades will see the normal progression from 'every day' to 'I can't remember the last time.' Sad but true. And did I say normal? Because it is.

    The coat one makes me tear up. It's not material things that matter. Lina just proved that.How nice of you to realize she was giving you something special.

    Keep em' coming girlfriend. I love these!

    xoxoxo
    Lo

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  7. Im with Renee...the coat and Lina is marvelous.

    xoxoxoxox

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  8. I enjoyed both of these, kj. Both show much knowledge and wisdom on your part in the writing of them.

    I'm so glad that you are writing regularly and passionately. The passion shows...

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  9. Like 'em both KJ. They touch on some profound and simple truths.

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  10. Oh, Lina, yes that is the one for me. Been so long since I've had sex, I can't relate :-).

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  11. pattee, hahaha, you're right! coming of age even 25 years later!

    von, thank you very much for your comment and your visit. i look forward to dropping by your place soon.

    thanks lo, your comment makes me think of passion in all its forms and its role/importance in the progression of life. ♥

    sonia, thank you sweetie!

    marion, writing this IS passionate for me. i'm not surprised you know that about me but it delights me that you do. xoxoxo

    thanks mark, as you know i had the chance yesterday to catch up on some of your poetry. wow, you are so prolific and it is so great to see the progression of your own observations and passions.

    annie, hee hee hee. you are SO cute, annie. you've made me chuckle right now. ♥

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  12. You know me, I usually go right for the sex-but the coat thing-that made me weepy. First wimper-when the child is amazed-she did this for us? Then her wanting to nurture.

    Sex is easy for me to "write"-nurturing, not so much.

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  13. time tempers all passions in one way or another #1

    Lina, so sweet and dear #2

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  14. Are these both in the same novel? I'm intrigued to see how the stories will be woven together.

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  15. debra kay, these were probably not the best two mini-novels to put with eachother! i appreciate your being touched by lina--obviously so was i--but debra kay, nobody's commenting on the S-E-X story...
    :)

    suki, i don't like that. i don't want that to be so. i don't know if feeling this way is a really good thing or a really bad thing!
    :)

    cs, yes, same novel. you will hear about the therapist throughout and you will learn about casey and catherine and maggie throughout. and other side characters as well. :)

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  16. Wow KJ I swear your writing is developing even more in strength and confidence ... I hope you are aware of how good it is! The characters are real and rounded and very, very believable, natural people who exist and live, breathe and talk ... They are interesting, loveable, absorbing, whole people with powerful stories to tell. Go You!!! :)

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