How many mistakes
does a good learner make?
Is it true that I do
What for me must be true?
I love and complain
Might forget my own name
But when I'm rolling along
I'll sing a fair song
just before dawn
it hums and it strums
the rhythm it comes
it hums and it strums
the rhythm it comes
no mistaking the sound
of being found.
love kj
You get to make as many mistakes as you can. They are really "learning opportunities" more than mistakes."
ReplyDeleteThe writers were right on:
You gotta make your own kind of music
Sing your own special song
Make your own kind of music
Even if nobody else sings along.
Oh rob bear: I can hear you singing! I hope you are dancing too!
DeleteI wrote this little poem in ten minutes after midnight when all I could do was let the words have their own say :-)
Xoxo
its beautiful kj! both the poem and the illustration - and i loved this line - no mistaking the sound
ReplyDeleteof being found.
Hello hdwk! I am always pleased to hear from you. I wish I could attribute the illustration (unknown) and I wish I could draw and create like that
DeleteYup, no mistaking home :-) ♥
I found US in our scars...
ReplyDeleteWhat? I only found cars in our scars
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:-). Love that last line.xoxo
ReplyDeleteThanks Annie. ♥
DeleteWow KJ!
ReplyDeleteTo say that I love this and that it came to me at the perfect time...
ReplyDeleteLove,
S
Yep. I'm needing to be found right about now.
ReplyDeleteTime to find myself once again.
xo
love,
lo♥
You are brilliant. And if a good learner makes lots of mistakes then I, too, am brilliant. :) xoxo
ReplyDelete"Is it true that I do
ReplyDeleteWhat for me must be true?"
Well, there you go. Objective truth and subjective truth. Are they both true? And how much work should a person be willing to go through to reconcile them? It seems to me that a person is going to be bumping his shins a lot if he doesn't put the two into harmony.
It's wonderful and refreshing to read a poet who can work rhymes so well!
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