tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post4511292762356006004..comments2024-03-27T13:36:21.967-04:00Comments on .OPTIONS for a Better World: Poof!kjhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-81095315967921294762009-12-09T01:04:38.538-05:002009-12-09T01:04:38.538-05:00cs, this makes me want to hightail it to the dicti...cs, this makes me want to hightail it to the dictionary to look up the definition of 'unseemly' :)<br /><br />why thank you, lo. <br /><br />linda, forgive me, i don't understand a word of this comment! is my memory at fault?<br /><br />renee, thank you for saying that my words allow you to see the person. that is what i hope for when i write. xoxokjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-8384296223639833572009-12-09T01:00:46.682-05:002009-12-09T01:00:46.682-05:00mark, i'm starting to roll! it feels great. i&...mark, i'm starting to roll! it feels great. i'm actually pleased with this paragraph: it says what I hoped for.<br /><br />marion, oh your comment is priceless. i can't answer it. i think she does treat people badly, but maybe not everyone. not her kids, for example. but your question is so rich, and i hope to uncover at least some of the answer. xo<br /><br />linda, terrified of commitment? yes and no. catherine will honor duty and obligation. that makes this even more complex, as i see it.... thanks for your support and always kind words. xoxo<br /><br />lo, dah! i have a recorder on my new wonderful iphone. i never thought of using it until your suggestion. thanks for knowing, that feels great.xoxo<br /><br />suki, passion is important to me. i can finally say that directly. and when i FEEL like writing, it is a joy, difficult, maybe painful, but a joy. xoxo<br /><br />thank you annie. xoxokjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-67750203324804099492009-12-08T23:30:25.024-05:002009-12-08T23:30:25.024-05:00Love it kj.
You have said it all and I can see t...Love it kj. <br /><br />You have said it all and I can see this person in my eye.<br /><br />xxoxoxoReneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11785932958464359112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-70882060264741351642009-12-08T18:58:01.668-05:002009-12-08T18:58:01.668-05:00HA! Yeah, that and overnight company has a tight ...HA! Yeah, that and overnight company has a tight expiration date.<br />;)Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03201759918154593244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-6254797560892993862009-12-08T18:18:00.255-05:002009-12-08T18:18:00.255-05:00I forgot to tell you that I love the new header AN...I forgot to tell you that I love the new header AND the fact that you changed the color of the font!<br /><br />It's a keeper. Although you shouldn't keep fish around for too long;)<br /><br />xoxostudio lolohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15363808478293833466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-41599124603166602342009-12-08T14:32:59.350-05:002009-12-08T14:32:59.350-05:00HA!! I had to put my hand over my mouth so as not ...HA!! I had to put my hand over my mouth so as not to be unseemly.secret agent womanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03763879283931347382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-4939882503750440682009-12-08T10:42:42.942-05:002009-12-08T10:42:42.942-05:00OH MY!!!
This is going to be sooo good. I can...OH MY!!!<br /><br />This is going to be sooo good. I can't wait. If anyone can desribe qualities of character, that would be you. You are surrounded by this panorama all day and your heart opens to all the possibilities of life.<br /><br />This woman seems terrified of committment. And thats her problem. 'Poof' is such a perfect word for her.Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03201759918154593244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-56709147515778412562009-12-08T10:02:39.542-05:002009-12-08T10:02:39.542-05:00I do believe I know where this person came from. S...I do believe I know where this person came from. She does not sound very nice and really isn't it just as well she left? Great writing my dear. xoxoAnniehttp://blissful-bohemian.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-37597838333993734282009-12-08T09:56:37.590-05:002009-12-08T09:56:37.590-05:00The paragraph says it all. Best of all though is ...The paragraph says it all. Best of all though is your obvious excitement and inspiration around this new approach to your book #2. I love reading about that, so lacking in my own life right now but present in the past. So many ideas they intrude on all aspects of life.Sounds good.sukipoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09351851210507048174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-15642228872495574952009-12-08T08:59:39.323-05:002009-12-08T08:59:39.323-05:00"Poof!" is perfect KJ ;)
You couldn'..."Poof!" is perfect KJ ;)<br />You couldn't have told it any better!<br /><br />Hey, Bri always used to carry a mini cassette recorder and kept it on the front seat of the car so he could "write" when the muse/idea hit him. It makes for safer driving instead of pen and paper.<br /><br />Maybe Santa could put one in your stocking?<br /><br />I love what Marion said! <br /><br />Talk to you later GF ;)<br /><br />xoxo<br />Lostudio lolohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15363808478293833466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-10064303577168090272009-12-08T08:44:32.171-05:002009-12-08T08:44:32.171-05:00This doesn't sound like a very nice woman. Do ...This doesn't sound like a very nice woman. Do we ever find out when life treats her as badly as she treats everyone else?<br /><br />It's good writing, kj...makes me want to know more. Keep the pens and paper handy!Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00607220451457829777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-35447553439693390202009-12-08T08:01:01.587-05:002009-12-08T08:01:01.587-05:00I may be wrong KJ but it sounds as if you are gett...I may be wrong KJ but it sounds as if you are getting ready to assemble quite a bit of what I have read here into a cohesive package. Get on with it!the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-43006146854070549142009-12-08T07:36:05.520-05:002009-12-08T07:36:05.520-05:00babs and somerset, i added a bit of explanation in...babs and somerset, i added a bit of explanation in the introduction. and yes, HAVE to have a pen at all times! xo<br /><br />baino, hug and tsup. i'm so glad you're in my crazy life.kjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-23833657986716317472009-12-08T04:10:37.188-05:002009-12-08T04:10:37.188-05:00Ah we can do without fairweather friends. I think ...Ah we can do without fairweather friends. I think it could work. In fact, I know how/what you're thinking about and possibly the direction in which you're going so yes, I think it can work. A bunch of vigniettes that finally form the larger picture. Not unlike screen writing really. You know, those stories within a series that offer something new but see the characters develop throughout the series. You go girl. You write very well by the way. I'm a little over pretentious syntax at the moment. I like to understand the story and the characters, not have to read it twice to understand the meaning.Bainohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-54708587839850238922009-12-08T03:26:33.683-05:002009-12-08T03:26:33.683-05:00This sounds exciting but I too would like an expla...This sounds exciting but I too would like an explanation of exactly what a paragraph story is. It's hard also to keep paper handy at all times - I once wrote on a stone which I picked up as I walked along a beach - it ruined my pen! Best of luck with the story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-83265888727957021732009-12-08T00:11:07.055-05:002009-12-08T00:11:07.055-05:00"a novel of stand alone paragraphs"
I..."a novel of stand alone paragraphs"<br />I'm ignorant, 'splain me this. Does that mean that each paragraph itself must tell a story all on it's own, and yet still fit into a large story? That sounds very hard to me.Of course I'm familiar with that idea applying to novels which stand alone but are a part of a bigger story, (series) but I never heard of this.<br />Good thing I just paint abstracts,,,I could never write. Especially something so structured.<br />Good for you!<br />Poof!~Babshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00912644174343772017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-34033733603726237032009-12-07T22:56:12.080-05:002009-12-07T22:56:12.080-05:00ah, snowbrush, your visits always make me smile. d...ah, snowbrush, your visits always make me smile. don't go by me about this, what do i know anyway? i just thought a disclaimer might protect the guilty... :)kjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-57121909466481562362009-12-07T22:51:29.771-05:002009-12-07T22:51:29.771-05:00"the characters come from me, not from the la..."the characters come from me, not from the law of the universe"<br /><br />Oh, my god! Do you mean to imply that there's a difference? I've never felt so let down.Snowbrushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00436087215476479042noreply@blogger.com