tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post151318134729565342..comments2024-03-27T13:36:21.967-04:00Comments on .OPTIONS for a Better World: Time to Rhymekjhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-12147606054218148322009-03-25T20:48:00.000-04:002009-03-25T20:48:00.000-04:00Nice! I especially like the first, and my thinkin...Nice! I especially like the first, and my thinking is that it takes on a new shape. Which is probably for the best.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-86637289891605136872009-03-25T18:07:00.000-04:002009-03-25T18:07:00.000-04:00renee, i've come to look forward to your comments....renee, i've come to look forward to your comments. i hope your neck is sticking into orgasmically fun situations and not sore for no non-orgasmic reasons. (smile) love you too.<BR/><BR/>bella, i look forward to you too. <BR/>i like what you do.<BR/>and whenever you draw<BR/>i smile in awe.<BR/>i think you are also sweet<BR/>and i love love love those little feet.<BR/><BR/>zapped, thrilled and inspired? i'm blushing and doing cartwheels.<BR/><BR/><BR/>wolfie, thanks. nice to see you here.kjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-71194702428141914002009-03-25T18:01:00.000-04:002009-03-25T18:01:00.000-04:00greta jane, what if i admitted i did not know i wr...greta jane, what if i admitted i did not know i wrote this poem in iambic pentameter?! i'll check out vikrem seth for sure. thanks!<BR/><BR/>suki, any time i can make you laugh, it's a good day! i'm glad!<BR/><BR/>hb, you rock too. manohman, would i like to meet you! if you ever come to the states....i treasure your comments on my poems. i treasure your poems. xo<BR/><BR/>rochambeau, how i really describe myself depends on the minute and the day!!kjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-28812074615882007012009-03-25T17:56:00.000-04:002009-03-25T17:56:00.000-04:00tammy, why, thank you!lolo, my friend, you know, i...tammy, why, thank you!<BR/><BR/>lolo, my friend, you know, i think i might be better off starting again as the fool... :)<BR/><BR/>dear happy sing-songy bella, are you also skipping down your pokadot street? <BR/><BR/>chief, ha! i have volumes of rhyming poems. i sing in rhyme in my sleep. i can;t help it!kjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-75001042666288628472009-03-25T17:06:00.000-04:002009-03-25T17:06:00.000-04:00Wonderful rhyming! I'm thrilled and inspired by yo...Wonderful rhyming! I'm thrilled and inspired by your poetic embrace. Thanks for sharing!get zappedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716557355765204155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-59931742331509426822009-03-25T09:30:00.000-04:002009-03-25T09:30:00.000-04:00so much fun, thx kj :Dso much fun, thx kj :Dlaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-9347390880947264752009-03-25T03:09:00.000-04:002009-03-25T03:09:00.000-04:00KJ,You are so very sweet,Your writing can't be bea...KJ,<BR/><BR/>You are so very sweet,<BR/>Your writing can't be beat,<BR/>I'll think of you<BR/>And smile I'll do<BR/>The next time I draw feet.<BR/><BR/>:D<BR/><BR/>I'm keeping my day job.Bella Sinclairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02139728758198482234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-39994963882979673902009-03-25T00:24:00.000-04:002009-03-25T00:24:00.000-04:00I love Poem 1 and Poem 2 is not shappby either.Tha...I love Poem 1 and Poem 2 is not shappby either.<BR/><BR/>Thank you for your sweet words.<BR/><BR/>I'm sorry it took forever to do comments today, my neck is killing me, so I am going as slow as molasses.<BR/><BR/>Another Canadian -- did you tell Laurel.<BR/><BR/>Love ReneeReneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11785932958464359112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-30124709268736452212009-03-24T18:34:00.000-04:002009-03-24T18:34:00.000-04:00Hi Kj,Thank you for taking the time to leave a com...Hi Kj,<BR/>Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment a while back. It was appreciated. I enjoy reading your words and especially how you describe yourself.<BR/><BR/>Have a great night.<BR/>Constancerochambeauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02142325813293645555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-67734836288086352009-03-24T17:31:00.000-04:002009-03-24T17:31:00.000-04:00hey KJ... you rock!your first poem was short but s...hey KJ... you rock!<BR/><BR/>your first poem was short but so thought-provoking... with that original image: <BR/>the rising dough changes to be something better... edible... useful...<BR/>we get the sense that the broken heart is changed to something new... that can be better than before...<BR/>and i think this is true as the experience matures the heart... thus the broken heart is more aware... and wise...<BR/><BR/>really loved it...<BR/><BR/><BR/>the second one with that playful rhythm really made me alive... think if John Donne read it, he would love your rock and roll and would dance to it... this new and truthful form of praying...<BR/><BR/>yes composing poetry is praying... how deep you probe...<BR/><BR/>this RE-turn to poetry is a journey... and just the fool knows how to do it again... this time better than before...<BR/><BR/>once i wrote,<BR/>the real king is the fool not Lear...<BR/><BR/>here we have the same archetypal image of the wise fool...<BR/><BR/>really really enjoyed your works... epiphanies of a beautiful soul...<BR/><BR/>namaste!human beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-53286580616260931502009-03-24T16:52:00.000-04:002009-03-24T16:52:00.000-04:00cute rhyming chiming. made me laughcute rhyming chiming. made me laughsukipoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09351851210507048174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-70050097702593689722009-03-24T11:15:00.000-04:002009-03-24T11:15:00.000-04:00KJ, I think that you might enjoy The Golden GAte, ...KJ, I think that you might enjoy The Golden GAte, by Vikram Seth. It is a novel written entirely in iambic pentameter.Greta_Janehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12478467683497276821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-28677469576735239962009-03-24T05:11:00.000-04:002009-03-24T05:11:00.000-04:00LOVE both poems. The first one is very adroit and...LOVE both poems. The first one is very adroit and moving. Some of my writer friends write rhyming poems - and they are published poets; rhyming poetry is taking on a new resurgence I believe. Keep it up! I'm glad the rhyming muse has returned for you.Kay Cookehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01791873464409271216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-9920558142874081752009-03-24T02:51:00.000-04:002009-03-24T02:51:00.000-04:00Oodles of optimism here, and I love that! Wonderf...Oodles of optimism here, and I love that! Wonderful poems, both of them. Now I'm in a happy sing-songy mood. :)Bella Sinclairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02139728758198482234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-69423715239770807692009-03-23T23:41:00.000-04:002009-03-23T23:41:00.000-04:00I wish I was feeling more with it right now so I c...I wish I was feeling more with it right now so I could rhyme back at ya!<BR/><BR/>These are great KJ! I'm not a huge lover of rhyming but I do love it when it works, and THIS works! I have a friend who'd love to sit and rhyme with you.<BR/><BR/>I only have a problem with one line. "I'm a fool starting fresh..."<BR/>I think you're a wise woman to start fresh ;)<BR/><BR/>And I LOVE "I'll start with the rhythm of now." Brilliant!<BR/><BR/>yay!<BR/>xostudio lolohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15363808478293833466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-74073000430808577942009-03-23T22:59:00.000-04:002009-03-23T22:59:00.000-04:00I loved them both. BravaI loved them both. BravaTammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-34385875686514931442009-03-23T22:42:00.000-04:002009-03-23T22:42:00.000-04:00ms sweets: of course! let's take our place at the ...ms sweets: of course! let's take our place at the head of the class!kjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22678097.post-50511531313184854542009-03-23T22:39:00.000-04:002009-03-23T22:39:00.000-04:00Confused with the best! Haha! Welcome to my world!...Confused with the best! Haha! Welcome to my world!Bainohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.com