Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Alex and Lily: Chapter 32

Explanation: The world lost a brilliant young writer today. She was 29 years old, a member of the precious Big Yellow Writing Group, and winner of Glamor Magazine's annual essay contest--an essay that will feature her always fashionable photo spread and her wonderful story--available on the news stands in just 8 days. She never saw the final print of it. Although she was verys sick, she died unexpectedly after spending a glorious courageous weekend writing the best hysterical stories about her family, with a dozen of us fellow writers at Big Yellow in awe of her simple magical talent.
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I cannot yet put my thoughts and the great loss into words. However, in her memory I am none-the-less following through with my intention to return to the love story of Alex and Lily. This story has been dormant since February, and yet the writing's almost finished.

To those of you who have followed along, with thin patience by now, thank you.

We resume with Alex and Lily together, after seven years apart:

The aisles at Trader Joe’s have an altogether different feel in early spring. It’s as though you could pick up a six pack of prepared optimism just as easily as an organic pizza or an avocado four pack. The ground in Western Mass. has been a deepening shade of white all winter and the measured hope of new growth and green grass is not lost on the shoppers of Trader Joes.

It is Saturday morning and Lily is making her way from the bread section, where she has stocked up on four packages of blueberry scones and one nutty loaf of Milton’s Multi Grain bread, toward the long aisle of frozen foods, where she knows she will find any number of fresh and easy to prepare entrees for the nights when both she and Alex don’t or won’t cook. They have been together now for 17 months and if you asked either about their nightly dinners and general contentment level, they would both say 'astonishing'.
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Alex is healthy and back to work. Monthly blood tests interrupt the otherwise gentle flow of their lives, but all in all, their implausible bond has thrived.
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Lily is looking at her grocery list . She does not see Max until they are within 12 feet of each other. She does not have time to respond to the ambivalence she has carried for almost two years: she has not seen this woman who rescued and loved her since she received Alex first letter, and for that reason alone she is unprepared to face her now. She is embarrassed—almost ashamed—that she had not made contact before now, has not explained things to her. And yet, despite all that, she is both delighted and relieved to see her again..
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Max is ready. Lily can tell that she has had some extra seconds to brace and prepare.
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“Hey! Lily.”, Max smiles. She barely pauses before she extends both hands in Lily's direction. It is a warm gesture—a gracious greeting—and Lily is reminded of how Max single-handedly pulled her up from depression and despair.
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“Max”,, Lily says. “Oh god, you look great.”
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Max nods. Once again, she will make this easy for Lily.
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“It's nice to see you. I heard Alex is doing well. I’m so glad.”
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Despite the effort, the unspoken will not work. They both know this.
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“Max, do I owe you an explanation?”, Lily asks.
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“No Lily. That’s ancient history. I’ve recovered. I had to replace you of course—no small feat...” Max smiles, “...But I’m doing fine, and I’m glad for you. I’m glad. I know how much you loved her. You must be overjoyed".
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“I am overjoyed, Max. She’s cancer free. Even the kids have come around some. And we’re headed to Paris in May—kind of a celebration."
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Max smiles again. She steadies her chin and looks fondly at Lily.
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“It’s great to see you, girl. Take care, ok"? She begins her pull away.
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Lily hesitates. “Max? How would you feel about getting together sometime, for coffee or something?"
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The sudden movement in Max’s right eye is barely noticeable, but Lily sees it. She has made a mistake.
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“No Lily, not now. Maybe someday, ok?”.
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“Sure”, Lily replies. “Great to see you.”
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With that, Max pushes her cart past Lily’s. Moments later Lily looks for her at the checkout counters, and again in the parking lot, but she would not see Max again. She would drive home with her five bags of groceries, and she would tell Alex that she had just seenleft one of the nicest people she has ever known. Then they would eat dinner--this night Chinese chicken with mushrooms and broccoli over rice. Later, just before bed, Lily would look at Alex and wonder if she could have even shown up if this woman named Max had not rescued her from the impossible weight of a hopeless heart.

13 comments:

  1. Why do the women, except Lily have male names? I am so confused. Maybe it's the cold in my head. I hope they eat organic foods. Those prepared foods are heavy in salt and fat content. Is Alex slim? Did Lily lose her hair from the chemno, did she have chemo? Would you please put labels on your stories so I can click on the label and then read them in bulk? Maybe you can call it Alex and Lily label. Hey what happend to the story of Izzy and Lizzy?

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  2. I mean chemo as in chemotherapy.

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  3. This is a very fitting tribute, KJ -- and beautifully written. I feel like we all have even more reason/inspiration to write after this day we've had ...

    Hugs, my friend.

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  4. ces, i hadn't noticed the "male" names. here's clarification for you: alex is alexandra, max is maxine, amy is amy, paula is paula, wendy is wendy. and lily is lily. btw, maybe you should stop reading, since i must tell you that is is alex, not lily, who underwent chemo, and yes, she did lose her hair. last, my dearest friend, the story of izzy and casey has gone underground temporarily, until the two of them can figure out how often and where they are going to see eachother...

    melissa, what a day. we have lost a terrific writer and a woman who had her own place in the world. thank you for your comments on my story--it means alot.

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  5. I don't know who you're talking about but offer my condolences.

    I DO know (unlike Ces HAHA) who the characters are in your story KJ. FINALLY the flow of your story continues!

    PS: I hope Ces's cold heals quickly.

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  6. anon, you are a doll. really. truly.

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  7. An interesting turn of perspective. Maybe I will turn it again-perhaps some of the people we think "left us" were really just people we helped out along the way. Perhaps the leaving had nothing to do with us at all. Or, if we were the leaver, perhaps we opened up a space for someone else.

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  8. OK, I've been "lurking" here for a while but I want to comment today. I'm so glad you've continued the L & A story! I'm certainly engrossed, and actually re-read all the chapters last weekend. Your blog is a joy to read and always picks me up when I've had a bad day.

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  9. I do know the characters and I do know the story but I just want to be able to re-read them at my leisure anytime.

    I read about the American Idol goof up today, about Paula Abdul giving a comment about a performance that has not been shown yet. Oh so it is not live? What a scam! The Gong Show had more character.

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  10. Oh and by the way, I was only referring to the name Alex and Max as male names not Lily and Amy and Paula. I have no buttons for you to push. Pwe!

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  11. debra kay, you are as ever thoughtful and wise! it is a pleasure to be reading your comments again.

    lauren, you have made me smile and made my day. thank you most sincerely. i would be happy to visit you if you would like...

    ces, actually, i probably will follow miladysa's lead and put the story up all in one place. american idol is indeed live: they changed the format and paula got confused and stupidly thought this guy had sung twice when he hadn't. it was very dramatic, actually. it's one of my favorite shows....

    push. push. what, no buttons? well then, i'll just be sweet instead.
    :)

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  12. A wonderful tribute to your friend - from what I have read of her she seems to have been a remarkable woman who had a great effect on some marvellous people.



    I loved the opening and closing paragraphs to this chapter and the character Max came over very well indeed!

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  13. WOW! i really loved reading this even though it is uncomfortable it is how it is... You are a really good writer!

    I'm so sorry i have been a bad blogbuddy :( I have had a grueling work schedule but I am getting to the end of it:)

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